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A Path Less Traveled
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2 k! \. D6 s# E% X0 ]I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown' G7 z, [! l% L: N

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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?0 S% `$ ?/ U& Y5 B& u9 {1 m7 F
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? os.tvboxnow.com2 S, L  z0 F, e2 j$ W2 ]

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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter..., S3 r4 ~: V! Y* Q7 x

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