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A Path Less Traveled
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?os.tvboxnow.com( [4 L4 }8 I5 R" ^: t9 _5 Y
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" S/ R" ^: u8 P! r" m) wos.tvboxnow.comWhat if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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0 l- P1 v" V$ v1 |) ~tvb now,tvbnow,bttvbIf I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?2 A" S  X* A, P  g8 I: F! e+ _( t
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# }6 P! Y. U+ u& O. e公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。5 o# `/ t7 c/ Q+ b; |

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rayoflight48

A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknownos.tvboxnow.com  H$ U* T* i1 Y7 r  y9 _
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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5 C8 A. M; C; s6 G公仔箱論壇If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? * g9 i7 o" V+ c; l8 O4 n
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0 ^- v1 r+ H, y  m" D7 o公仔箱論壇Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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