Keevin

而家出發去蒲
goodbye class and 主任
Fian. 發表於 2010-2-4 07:38 PM

HAPPY BIRTHDAY !

Keevin

Miss~~~ ,我想今日晏晝 5點左右過嚟你度攞支嘢對住你對奶, 可以嗎?
小飛機 發表於 2010-2-5 02:02 PM

機機你都好狼死

Keevin

祝大家事事如意, 開開心心!

Keevin

表達能力極高超
加上用詞確美妙
MISS 點敢將你笑
只係間中唔啱調
句尾押韻才觸礁
待我提點先知曉
認我師父喺度叫
俾你讚到輕飄飄  
確實 ...
Fian. 發表於 2010-3-10 11:49 AM

料想不到打不通
多次致電撲個空
今天下午兩點鐘
本想相約來接送

只怪自己太衝衝
希望好運來碰碰
還望Miss多包容
因為忙於工作中

Keevin

43659# Fian.

好有才幸

Keevin

各位晚呀

Keevin

I miss Hong Kong and family members very much
want to go back to Hong Kong
Fian. 發表於 2011-7-18 02:52 PM

Just do it !

Keevin

Hi Kee "GOR GOR" long time no see
miss you so much
but I need to stay here longer
I met a white man
who like me very much
and he want me to  ...
Fian. 發表於 2011-7-20 05:37 AM

Enjoy your romantic moment !

Keevin

44645# Fian.

Miss, your english has improved a lot .

Please don't mind if I correct some of your mistakes.

use "feet" instead of "feets".

use "treat him" instead of "exploit him"

use "do me a favour"

use "pretend to be his girl friend"

Anyway, congratulation that you have found such a rich "Ah 4"

Keevin

Thank you for correct my mistakes
otherwise I will never correct
I learn the English everyday
speak everyday here
and I want to learn more from you
plea ...
Fian. 發表於 2011-7-22 01:18 AM

Be honest, your english is good enough for you to communicate with people in canada.
Since you are so clever, I believe, by the time you come back to Hong Kong, you will live up to the title "Miss".
Become a real English Teacher.

Keevin

I went to Niagara Falls with my younger brothers's daughters last Sunday and Monday
we went to Water Park to swam and watched Magic Show
and went t ...
Fian. 發表於 2011-8-12 06:58 AM

Excellent English !

It would be much better if you can focus more on grammer and plural
For example, use Brother's daughter instead of  BrotherS's daughter. If your younger brother has more than 1 daughter, use brother's daughterS.
And whenever you use "to" connecting two verbs, use present tense.
For example, use "to swim" instead of "to swam".

By the way, when do you come back to Hong Kong ?

Best wishes !!

Keevin

My younger brother has two daughters
the younger daughter go back to Hong Kong today
she is on the plane now
thank you for your teaching
I wa ...
Fian. 發表於 2011-8-28 05:38 AM

very good

Being a picky teacher, I would like to highlight two more points.

1.
"the younger daughter go back to Hong Kong today"
If I were you, I will write "his younger daughter go back to Hong Kong today"

2.
"haven't decide"
The correct grammer is "haven't decided"
This is "perfect tense", use [past participle]

e.g.   go, went, gone
go     is present tense
went is past tense
gone is past participle

most of the verbe, the past tense is the same as past participle.

Sometimes grammer is important, different grammer will lead to different meaning.
For example, someone ask you "do you love me ?"
If your answer is "I do" means you love hiim.
But if your answer is "I did" that means you don't love him anymore. You only loved him in the past.
So, if your ah 4 ask you this question, now you know how to answer him.

Whatever is your decision, stay or come back. I wish you have your happy life wherever you are .

Keevin

3000 頁, Miss 都唔浦頭

Keevin

机机爾 call 仲仲有無 miss 消息啦

Keevin

唔對路