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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown; D% _1 F- u- d) i" u3 S# T
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you, Z* `0 }7 ]+ a

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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?( ^. M9 K. g" p% I+ e
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1 q4 n. E; P2 ?. f5 j公仔箱論壇If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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( B2 o3 D/ N' c3 n: j! dWhere I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown% r& G( L( b# C

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light?
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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